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incontinent
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 Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:26 pm |
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Location: Cumbria
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..... and afterwards
Wrapped in togetherness,
In the stillness swept with your breath,
I listen to the ebb
And flow of your love:
You breathing for us both.
As the tide rises and
Falls in the now
Of our being
I know of your love,
And my heart swells
In return.
‘til tomorrow love
‘til tomorrow........
Goodnight.
Oct 2010
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TheRaven
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:53 am |
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Location: Boston United States
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Good poem. Thanks. Enjoyed the sentiment and liked the style.
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Tanza
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2011 8:51 am |
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Oh that's lovely!!! Deeply evocative. Loved it.
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incontinent
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Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2011 8:19 am |
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Location: Cumbria
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