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Mattfear
 Post subject: I feel no pain
PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:28 am 
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I feel no pain 
I feel no sorrow
Will i be here today ?
Or gone tomorrow.

I experience no joy 
I experience no hate 
Will i have a life ?
Or is it too late !

I dont know whats up 
I dont know whats down 
Am i floating ?
Or touching the ground.

WHAT AM I ?

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ClaraJaneGreeves
 Post subject: Re: I feel no pain
PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:59 am 
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Hello and welcome to Grimney. Like your poem, a bit cryptic. Not sure it's very cheery though! You going to share more?
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Mattfear
 Post subject: Re: I feel no pain
PostPosted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:48 pm 
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Thank you, im abit new to this im not the best but its nice too share words xD

what the poem/riddle is about is what ever you think it is but i wrote it based on a unborn baby

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Nydas
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I like that, very good thanks
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Witch
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:31 pm 
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Welcome,

Nice work, look forward to more.

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