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incontinent
 Post subject: Yearnings
PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:05 pm 
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A clear memory of times past.

Icy raindrops on crystal glass
Watching is what I’m doing in class.
An open window - joy for me
It’s cool, it’s fresh
My lungs breathe free

Outside, outside I’d like to be
Outside running wild and free-
Rasping grass on ankles wet
And shimmering leaves
I'll not forget
Freedom beckons
I’ll break free – but... but not just yet!



Memory196? ish

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 Post subject: Re: Yearnings
PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:15 pm 
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Big Like. ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Yearnings
PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:21 pm 
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Good evening Iceman. Thank you for your compliment :)
Your name denies the warmth and honesty of your poetry. Thank you for your poetic words.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:41 pm 
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I really like this one too :D
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:45 am 
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Agreed! I'm sure a lot of people can identify with this!

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