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incontinent
 Post subject: Whitehaven Sunset
PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 10:27 pm 
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Sometimes all I have to do is look out of my window to feel awe and wonder- to feel at home.

Oh! What a sight!
A rose-crested horizon painting the skyline
In turbulent cloud,
Burning Whitehaven’s rooftops into
Stark silhouettes,
Parting our land from heaven’s expanse.
I feel the dying day’s warm heart
Slipping from today
Into tomorrow’s blue,
Painting my earth as through rose tinted glasses.

I love my world.

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 Post subject: Re: Whitehaven Sunset
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 7:04 am 
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From the heart .x well written.

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 Post subject: Re: Whitehaven Sunset
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 9:47 am 
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Love love love!

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 Post subject: Re: Whitehaven Sunset
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wow lovely
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 Post subject: Re: Whitehaven Sunset
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2012 6:00 pm 
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Thanks everyone. Much appreciated. However, the murky mist is not inspiring me at the moment!! I am wishing I was somewhere else.:D

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 Post subject: Re: Whitehaven Sunset
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2012 8:20 pm 
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Loved this one too - :D wishing you sunshine on a rainy day...
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