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Iceman
 Post subject: Haunted?
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:26 pm 
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In darkest corner cold and damp
A fellow sits and stares
His jacket worn too many times
His socks no longer pairs

He sits alone in silent thought
Like life just etched him so
His laces lie untied and frayed
His head bowed down so low,

A shadow forms across his face
Where once a razor drew
The greying hair a testament
To all that he's been through.

No seat has he just boarded floor
To rest upon and dwell
A punch drunk look of life and times
A living breathing hell

I look so deep into his eyes
To find what lies within
But stand in shock it's thin disguise
Its me sat there not him.

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Meadow
 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:28 pm 
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Wow! That's powerful Iceman. Another good one :D

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Iceman
 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:31 pm 
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thanks Meadow...hope you are well this fine evening x

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Meadow
 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
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I am very well thank you Iceman and ....looking forward to this novel of yours!

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 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:55 pm 
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Ooooh chilling!
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Iceman
 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
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Meadow wrote:
I am very well thank you Iceman and ....looking forward to this novel of yours!

Why thankyou :-) its a little bit daunting but i must admit i am enjoying writing it !

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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:36 pm 
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Iceman you never fail, I love it x
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 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:39 pm 
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That's really really good! :D
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 Post subject: Re: Haunted?
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ClaraJaneGreeves wrote:
That's really really good! :D


Thanks Clara, glad you liked it, I enjoyed piecing it together, it makes it all worthwhile when others enjoy what you do x

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