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 Post subject: Lost Love
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 12:47 pm 
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The golden pheasant struts,
Pecking the air impatiently,
Searching, searching for the
Lost love hiding in the undergrowth
Wrapped in frosted air

Nearby the bark of the dog fox echoes
Through the shadowed copse,
Freezing all movement,
Arresting breath.
Searching, searching for the
Lost love hiding in the undergrowth
Wrapped in frosted air

High above the silhouette of
Treetops, the wise moon
Looks down
Searching, searching for the
Lost love hiding in the undergrowth
Wrapped in frosted air

And the stillness listens,
And the searching breeze listens,
And the broken heart listens;
Searching, searching for the
Lost love hiding in the undergrowth
Wrapped in frosted air

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And
In the caverns
In the city,
In the taverns and the halls
Still and lonely hearts
Listen for the breath
Of a lost love
And go
Searching, searching for the
Lost love hiding in the halls

And their hearts lie heavy
And their spirits dim
As they listen for the breath
Of a lost love
And go
Searching, searching for the
Lost love hiding in the halls

In the caverns of
In the city,
In the taverns and the halls
The lost love
Is hiding, hiding
And waiting for their calls

June 2011

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 Post subject: Re: Lost Love
PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:01 pm 
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Location: Looking pretty behind the bar at Holme's Tavern
Lovely. Would be great set to music.

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 Post subject: Re: Lost Love
PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 10:48 am 
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Unfortunately I don't have the music in me. Can you suggest a tune?
Can anyone suggest a tune?

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 Post subject: Re: Lost Love
PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 10:51 am 
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love this :D


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 Post subject: Re: Lost Love
PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 7:19 pm 
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I love the pace of this piece Incontinent,
The words draw you forward at a compelling speed. I'll have a chat with Nydas about finding you a tune, she's witchy good at it!

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 Post subject: Re: Lost Love
PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:36 pm 
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Thanks for your interest. It is much appreciated. :D

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