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Loki
 Post subject: The Beast Below
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:22 am 
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A horse and a man, above below,
one has a plan, but both must go,
mile after mile, above beneath,
one has a smile, and one has teeth,
though the man above might say hello,
expect no love from the beast below.

While the whole world is deep asleep,
walk waiter love, lies deep asleep,
This story must end and this world must know,
we all depend on the beast below.
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KaraJarina
 Post subject: Re: The Beast Below
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 2:17 pm 
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Your poem fits in well here, it's good. Thank you for sharing. What is the beast below Loki?


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 Post subject: Re: The Beast Below
PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 11:49 am 
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Really like this.

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Nydas
 Post subject: Re: The Beast Below
PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:15 pm 
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Interesting poem Loki, thanks. Good to meet you!
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