View unanswered posts | View active topics
 
|
Page 1 of 1
|
[ 5 posts ] |
|
| Author |
Message |
|
Meadow
|
 Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 11:03 pm |
|
 |
| Site Admin |
 |
Joined: Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:54 am
Posts: 5574
Location: Lost in Grimney
|
|
A shiny line of jet black cars
Glides silently by
The first filled to the roof with flowers
The restwith passengers in dark attire
A sudden pause in a busy, bustling day
Slow motion reminder for those
Immersed in life's intensity
Whose eyes quickly divert away
Towards intriguing pavement slabs
For no-one wants to gaze too long
Upon their own mortality
|
|
| Top |
|
 |
|
DebraCobra
|
Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:47 am |
|
Joined: Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:07 pm
Posts: 86
Location: London
|
|
Solemn piece, but good writing Meadow.
|
|
| Top |
|
|
|
KaraJarina
|
Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:02 am |
|
Joined: Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:12 pm
Posts: 124
Location: Grimney Tourist Information
|
|
Slightly shuddering, but effective verse Meadow.
|
|
| Top |
|
|
|
Iceman
|
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:17 am |
|
Joined: Thu May 05, 2011 11:24 pm
Posts: 250
|
|
Thought provoking...excellent.
|
|
| Top |
|
|
|
|
Page 1 of 1
|
[ 5 posts ] |
|
Who is online |
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests |
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum
|
Login
Register
FAQ
Search
