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Tanza
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 2:50 pm 
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Oh yes it would be quite unhinged
If one of your piggies was befringed
But I'd love to see that wondrous sight
And I promise not to take a bite!
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WaylandCybersmith
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 3:09 pm 
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To write a poem in four lines. Bing
Is a thing I have had a go at. Ting
The only problem I have. Bong
Is my rhymes sometimes go wrong.

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WaylandCybersmith
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 3:12 pm 
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Be brief, concise,
Keep your rhyme tight,
Your words precise.
But sometimes I just want to put as much as I can in the last line. Is that all right?

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LegoStan
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 3:13 pm 
So you think it quite insane
To have a pollex with a mane?
I'll put it back inside my boots
As soon as I've redone my roots
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LegoStan
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 3:23 pm 
Of course waycyber - fine be me
Your quatrain ended splendidly
In fact, I'll wager you an orange
That nobody would mind if your last line hadn't rhymed at all!
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Tanza
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 3:46 pm 
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You boys are messing up the rhymes
The coppers are coming to issue fines
And I wouldn't blame them one little bit
You're being so naughty...it just aint legit
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Tanza
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 3:52 pm 
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Don't worry yourself, I really don't care
If all of your toes were covered in hair
And if you are lucky and don't scare too quick
I'll show you my moustache, so shiny and slick!

(You thought I was gonna say it was on my dick...well I didn't...ahah!)
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LegoStan
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 3:57 pm 
Harsh! Waycyber's innocent,
It's only I that should repent
For crimes against a rhyming scheme
I hope myself I can redeem!
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Tanza
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 4:11 pm 
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I'm just being jealous, you're both so sublime
At churning your thoughts out and making them rhyme
I couldn't be more in such awe of a pair
And I'm not talking bollocks, I just wouldn't dare!
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LegoStan
PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2011 7:40 pm 
Dear Tanza, far too kind thou art
What I type comes from the heart
Ocasionally from the head
Failing that, my arse instead.
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