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Gwenllian
 Post subject: darkness falls
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:39 pm 
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I thought the dark days had gone forever
but I woke this morning and saw no light
only the grey misty haze that covers my world

Nothing goes right on a day like this
the rain is falling and so are my tears
I wish that I could disappear........
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Tanza
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 2:40 pm 
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I hope you're feeling ok Gwenlian. I would be very sad to think this was an indication of your current mood.
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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 3:17 pm 
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Thanks Tanza sadly this is one of those days , I thought they had gone forever
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Redvilst
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 5:01 pm 
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Here is a cure Gwenllian. Repeat the italicised lines with heart, and the mangy mutt runs away, tail between legs! :D


The Blues They Are A Mongrel

I know when you are prowling
You cur!
You leap in and give a nip
You cur!
And I know from that small sharp pain
You’ll soon have me in your grip
Black Dog!
Your poisoned jaw clamps round my heart
Black Dog!
And squeeze out all its spark
Black Dog!
You suck in all trace of light
And leave me in the dark
You cur!

You pounce and all your weight
You cur!
Drags my shoulders down
You cur!
My mind becomes a torpid sea
And all my thoughts they drown
Black Dog!
Friends they seem to turn away
Black Dog!
Because they fear the hurt
Black Dog!
Why don’t you take a running leap?
You make me feel like dirt.

Bastard. Utter utter bastard.
Flaming rotten utter utter bastard.

Dog! When you’ve had your fun
Get lost!

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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:28 pm 
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Thank you Redvilst, you made me smile a little.
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Iceman
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:02 pm 
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We all have crosses hard to bear
We all have times no-one should share
But when the dark descends your way
make light from friends all here to stay...x

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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:04 am 
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Thanks Iceman , now smiling and crying in equal measure , the friends I've made here are so special x
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PhilomenaAquitaine
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:06 am 
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Hugs. X

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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:13 am 
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Thank you Philomena, we spend so much time together, means a lot !!
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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: darkness falls
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:25 am 
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Though my world is still dark and grey
and my heart feels black as night
still friends kind words push through the dark
tomorrow I may see their light
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