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Iceman
 Post subject: Dare,
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:17 pm 
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So what am i to write today upon this canvas bare?

That I am fine, ok or well? , as if you really care.

String sentences profound as such, that tell you all is well.

Whilst heart is shouting dare it might, in truth I am in hell.


Be still my demons for a while, bring forward silence hence,

They prey upon my very soul dispel such innocence.

I stumble through this sorry life as if caught in a spell,

Revolving faster evermore no exit can't you tell? .


No sanctions thus am I dispensed, no respite so allowed,

And stand I broken many times before the baying crowd.

But deep inside the angst of life that haunts my waking hours,

A flicker of what I could be, a glimpse of different powers.


Though life it tells a sorry tale such glimpses glow then fade,

For paths that I must follow hence have clearly so been made.

I would complain and rightly so, a noise to wake the dead,

But fear i walk amongst them now so live with them instead.


So dreams that wane upon the dusk eternal in their truth

Will haunt this life through chances missed as i lived out my youth

Life takes the forms of challenge thus to push me to my limit

If I'd been born with all those facts... would heart dare to begin it? .

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Meadow
 Post subject: Re: Dare,
PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:23 pm 
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Another great poem Iceman! Hope you are ok :D

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SMacca
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:20 am 
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Great poem ;)
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Gwenllian
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 11:34 pm 
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Oh Iceman, never a disappointment x
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Surreal
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2012 12:58 am 
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This poem is actually unreal x Love it
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TheVamp
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2012 4:12 am 
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Amazing poem sugar. Another favorite.
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