It is currently Tue Aug 04, 2026 3:09 pm

All times are UTC [ DST ]




Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 41 posts ]  Go to page 1, 2, 3, 4, 5  Next
Author Message
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 5:15 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Fri Mar 13, 2009 8:30 pm
Posts: 323
Location: The Queen's Coven
Hi!
When I was a teenager I thought 'Dulce et Decorum Est' was the most powerful poem I'd ever read and I still think (more years later than I am prepared to admit :roll: ) that it is right up there at the top!

What would be the most powerful poem you've ever read/heard?

thanks
Nydas
http://www.walkerbroad.co.uk

_________________
Nydas
http://www.walkerbroad.co.uk
http://www.thesanitycompany.co.uk/


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:06 pm 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:49 am
Posts: 43
Location: Grimney Outlander
Good question. I agree that Wilfred Owen's poem is very powerful, but I listened to Captain James Willard's poem on here, I think that equals it near enough. Owen was a fantastic poet. I thought your poem was very clever by the way. I might even try and write something as this website is quite inspiring. :D


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:42 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:53 am
Posts: 188
Location: Hampshire
Jolly good question indeed! I've been mulling this one over and can't decide! The first poem that ever made me think hard, really hard was also by Wilfred Owen (maybe it's our age ;) ) it's called The Send Off.

And to digress somewhat, the first poet that made me laugh out loud... Spike Millagan. So many to choose from....I can't! Oh, yes I can. This one called
BUMP
Things that go 'bump' in the night
Should not really give one a fright.
It's the hole in each ear
That lets in the fear,
That, and the absence of light!

It's funny 'cause it's true :D

_________________
http://www.missdemena.co.uk


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:48 am 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Sat Feb 21, 2009 9:46 pm
Posts: 23
Read your poems Nydas, Elvira. This strange place seems to have quite a lot of talent floating about. I've been a member for ages, and love the work that is being produced. Some of my favourite poems are actually only posted here. But I guess I'm going with Wilfred Owen too. Although my wife loved Rossetti, and I think that these words always make me think of her. Very moving.

Remember

REMEMBER me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor I half turn to go, yet turning stay.
Remember me when no more day by day
You tell me of our future that you plann'd:
Only remember me; you understand
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave
A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad.


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 1:49 am 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:07 pm
Posts: 86
Location: London
This is my favourite poem. It's how I found Grimney land. It's not to everyones taste, but means a lot. Wilfred Owen was brilliant. Like the Remember Poem too, takes me back to when I was at college and my first boyfriend.


-- written by Max Ehrmann in the 1920s --
Not "Found in Old St. Paul's Church"! -- see below

Go placidly amid the noise and the haste,
and remember what peace there may be in silence.

As far as possible, without surrender,
be on good terms with all persons.
Speak your truth quietly and clearly;
and listen to others,
even to the dull and the ignorant;
they too have their story.
Avoid loud and aggressive persons;
they are vexatious to the spirit.

If you compare yourself with others,
you may become vain or bitter,
for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.
Enjoy your achievements as well as your plans.
Keep interested in your own career, however humble;
it is a real possession in the changing fortunes of time.

Exercise caution in your business affairs,
for the world is full of trickery.
But let this not blind you to what virtue there is;
many persons strive for high ideals,
and everywhere life is full of heroism.
Be yourself. Especially do not feign affection.
Neither be cynical about love,
for in the face of all aridity and disenchantment,
it is as perennial as the grass.

Take kindly the counsel of the years,
gracefully surrendering the things of youth.
Nurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune.
But do not distress yourself with dark imaginings.
Many fears are born of fatigue and loneliness.

Beyond a wholesome discipline,
be gentle with yourself.
You are a child of the universe
no less than the trees and the stars;
you have a right to be here.
And whether or not it is clear to you,
no doubt the universe is unfolding as it should.

Therefore be at peace with God,
whatever you conceive Him to be.
And whatever your labors and aspirations,
in the noisy confusion of life,
keep peace in your soul.

With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams,
it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy.


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 6:16 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:53 am
Posts: 188
Location: Hampshire
Looks like Wilfred is running away with it!

But stop, I remembered one last night that I used to love!
Edgar Allan Poe - The Raven.

It's a long one but I love the tension in the rhymes. http://www.heise.de/ix/raven/Literature ... Raven.html

Hello to you all, Willow, TubbyHubby, DebraCobra and Nydas! :)

I'm off for a little lie down now.

_________________
http://www.missdemena.co.uk


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2011 9:12 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Fri Mar 13, 2009 8:30 pm
Posts: 323
Location: The Queen's Coven
Thanks Willow, there is much talent here methinks.

It may be an impossible question to answer such is the power of words! The Rossetti poem is so powerful, wonderful! and the others too, more more more!!!
:D

_________________
Nydas
http://www.walkerbroad.co.uk
http://www.thesanitycompany.co.uk/


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:08 am 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:49 am
Posts: 43
Location: Grimney Outlander
Hello Elvira! Have to post the poem. Love the Raven too. It's a joy to see that people still enjoy poetry. Dulce is performed on here by Grimnian. Hope more people join up, as the community stop and starts. This little forum could prove to be good and educational, thanks Nydas, as it introduced me to Desiderata, and William Blake and John Masefield, had not heard of Remember until yesterday, my education was rather lacking. :oops: Thanks TubbyHubby! So hopefully I shall discover lots of new poets in Grimney, as well as old ones outside the land! :shock:

Dulce Et Decorum Est

Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
Till on the haunting flares we turned our backs
And towards our distant rest began to trudge.
Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots
But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots
Of disappointed shells that dropped behind.

GAS! Gas! Quick, boys!-- An ecstasy of fumbling,
Fitting the clumsy helmets just in time;
But someone still was yelling out and stumbling
And floundering like a man in fire or lime.--
Dim, through the misty panes and thick green light
As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.

In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
He plunges at me, guttering, choking, drowning.

If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin;
If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud
Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,--
My friend, you would not tell with such high zest
To children ardent for some desperate glory,
The old Lie: Dulce et decorum est
Pro patria mori.


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:45 am 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:12 pm
Posts: 124
Location: Grimney Tourist Information
Welcome Nydas! Good to read more poems, and liked your short story, made my hair stand on end. Favourite poems. I shall have to think about that! :?:


Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:27 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Thu Mar 19, 2009 3:39 am
Posts: 4
Location: The Circle Of Overseers
Splendid suggestion asking for favorite poems. I like all the choices so far, but being rather gothic in nature, I have to mention this forgotten classic..... Flannan Isle....


FLANNAN ISLE

by: Wilfrid Wilson Gibson

HOUGH three men dwell on Flannan Isle
To keep the lamp alight,
As we steer'd under the lee, we caught
No glimmer through the night!

A passing ship at dawn had brought
The news; and quickly we set sail,
To find out what strange thing might all
The keepers of the deep-sea light.

The winter day broke blue and bright,
With glancing sun and glancing spray,
As o'er the swell our boat made way,
As gallant as a gull in flight.

But, as we near'd the lonely Isle;
And look'd up at the naked height;
And saw the lighthouse towering white,
With blinded lantern, that all night
Had never shot a spark
Of comfort through the dark,
So ghastly in the cold sunlight
It seem'd, that we were struck the while
With wonder all too dread for words.

And, as into the tiny creek
We stole beneath the hanging crag,
We saw three queer, black, ugly birds--
Too big, by far, in my belief,
For guillemot or shag--
Like seamen sitting bold upright
Upon a half-tide reef:
But, as we near'd, they plunged from sight,
Without a sound, or spurt of white.

And still too mazed to speak,
We landed; and made fast the boat;
And climb'd the track in single file,
Each wishing he was safe afloat,
On any sea, however far,
So it be far from Flannan Isle:
And still we seem'd to climb, and climb,
As though we'd lost all count of time,
And so must climb for evermore.
Yet, all too soon, we reached the door--
The black, sun-blister'd lighthouse door,
That gaped for us ajar.

As, on the threshold, for a spell,
We paused, we seem'd to breathe the smell
Of limewash and of tar,
Familiar as our daily breath,
As though 'twere some strange scent of death:
And so, yet wondering, side by side,
We stood a moment, still tongue-tied:
And each with black foreboding eyed
The door, ere we should fling it wide,
To leave the sunlight for the gloom:
Till, plucking courage up, at last,
Hard on each other's heels we pass'd
Into the living-room.

Yet, as we crowded through the door,
We only saw a table, spread
For dinner, meat and cheese and bread;
But all untouch'd; and no one there:
As though, when they sat down to eat,
Ere they could even taste,
Alarm had come; and they in haste
Had risen and left the bread and meat:
For on the table-head a chair
Lay tumbled on the floor.
We listen'd; but we only heard
The feeble cheeping of a bird
That starved upon its perch:
And, listening still, without a word,
We set about our hopeless search.

We hunted high, we hunted low,
And soon ransack'd the empty house;
Then o'er the Island, to and fro,
We ranged, to listen and to look
In every cranny, cleft or nook
That might have hid a bird or mouse:
But, though we searched from shore to shore,
We found no sign in any place:
And soon again stood face to face
Before the gaping door:
And stole into the room once more
As frighten'd children steal.

Aye: though we hunted high and low,
And hunted everywhere,
Of the three men's fate we found no trace
Of any kind in any place,
But a door ajar, and an untouch'd meal,
And an overtoppled chair.

And, as we listen'd in the gloom
Of that forsaken living-room--
O chill clutch on our breath--
We thought how ill-chance came to all
Who kept the Flannan Light:
And how the rock had been the death
Of many a likely lad:
How six had come to a sudden end
And three had gone stark mad:
And one whom we'd all known as friend
Had leapt from the lantern one still night,
And fallen dead by the lighthouse wall:
And long we thought
On the three we sought,
And of what might yet befall.

Like curs a glance has brought to heel,
We listen'd, flinching there:
And look'd, and look'd, on the untouch'd meal
And the overtoppled chair.

We seem'd to stand for an endless while,
Though still no word was said,
Three men alive on Flannan Isle,
Who thought on three men dead.

_________________
TheEyeOfChaos


Top
 Profile  
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 41 posts ]  Go to page 1, 2, 3, 4, 5  Next

All times are UTC [ DST ]


Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 7 guests


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Search for:
Jump to:  
cron
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group