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Witch
 Post subject: Voices
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:28 pm 
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Lightly whispering in my ear
Causing me so much fear
For whenever I hear you speak
I cannot stop becoming weak

All you tell me I must do
I try so hard not to listen to you
But your commands I will complete
My own beliefs you will defeat

They all say you'll go away
Each and every single day
I've tried so hard to make that true
But I just can't live without you

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Iceman
 Post subject: Re: Voices
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:53 pm 
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Very deep.. and well written Witch :)

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Witch
 Post subject: Re: Voices
PostPosted: Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:06 pm 
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Thank you Iceman.

Much appreciated.

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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: Voices
PostPosted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:59 pm 
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lovely !
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Really thought provoking Witch! :)
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 Post subject: Re: Voices
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Many thanks

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