Have been better...have been worse, but i survive
x thanks for asking.
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| Author: | Iceman [ Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Weapon Of Solitude |
A lonely walk to bedroom cold Just lying there to grow so old No warmth from heart entwined with mine No special hugs my soul to dine, Just sorry thoughts and empty silence Hurt so bad, by lonely violence, Alas such feelings cant be shown For that would break a happy home But lying here for one more night Brings one less day that i can fight To save whats left of who i am And stop her crazy master plan I'm almost lost for all to see For underneath this all.. it's me Will I survive and learn to live? Pray God... for I have much to give. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Wed Jun 20, 2012 11:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
Awww are you ok? |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Thu Jun 21, 2012 11:24 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
Have been better...have been worse, but i survive x thanks for asking.
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| Author: | Meadow [ Thu Jun 21, 2012 2:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
Another hug coming your way Iceman 
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Thu Jun 21, 2012 5:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
I know that poetry is sometimes a pure concentration of an emotion rather than your current state of mind, it's just a very sad poem. Love, eh? |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:19 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
PhilomenaAquitaine wrote: I know that poetry is sometimes a pure concentration of an emotion rather than your current state of mind, it's just a very sad poem. Love, eh? ...or lack of it ...  x Thanks Meadow x 
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
Awwww Iceman! Big mermaid hug for you. People love your poetry and I think that is because there is so much of you in your words. X |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Thu Jun 21, 2012 11:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
I concur!
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| Author: | Iceman [ Fri Jun 22, 2012 9:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Weapon Of Solitude |
Thanks all, if life wasn't such a roller coaster ride poetry would have no place in humanity x. |
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