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Iceman
 Post subject: The Weapon Of Solitude
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:45 pm 
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A lonely walk to bedroom cold

Just lying there to grow so old

No warmth from heart entwined with mine

No special hugs my soul to dine,

Just sorry thoughts and empty silence

Hurt so bad, by lonely violence,

Alas such feelings cant be shown

For that would break a happy home

But lying here for one more night

Brings one less day that i can fight

To save whats left of who i am

And stop her crazy master plan

I'm almost lost for all to see

For underneath this all.. it's me

Will I survive and learn to live?

Pray God... for I have much to give.

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PhilomenaAquitaine
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 11:00 pm 
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Awww are you ok?

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Iceman
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 11:24 am 
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Have been better...have been worse, but i survive ;-) x thanks for asking.

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Meadow
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 2:12 pm 
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Another hug coming your way Iceman :D

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PhilomenaAquitaine
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 5:47 pm 
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I know that poetry is sometimes a pure concentration of an emotion rather than your current state of mind, it's just a very sad poem. Love, eh?

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Iceman
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:19 pm 
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PhilomenaAquitaine wrote:
I know that poetry is sometimes a pure concentration of an emotion rather than your current state of mind, it's just a very sad poem. Love, eh?
...or lack of it ... :( x Thanks Meadow x :)

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PhilomenaAquitaine
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:36 pm 
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Awwww Iceman! Big mermaid hug for you. People love your poetry and I think that is because there is so much of you in your words. X

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I concur! :)
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Iceman
PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 9:30 am 
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Thanks all, if life wasn't such a roller coaster ride poetry would have no place in humanity x.

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