Wow! That's powerful Iceman. Another good one
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:26 pm ] |
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In darkest corner cold and damp A fellow sits and stares His jacket worn too many times His socks no longer pairs He sits alone in silent thought Like life just etched him so His laces lie untied and frayed His head bowed down so low, A shadow forms across his face Where once a razor drew The greying hair a testament To all that he's been through. No seat has he just boarded floor To rest upon and dwell A punch drunk look of life and times A living breathing hell I look so deep into his eyes To find what lies within But stand in shock it's thin disguise Its me sat there not him. |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Haunted? |
Wow! That's powerful Iceman. Another good one
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:31 pm ] |
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thanks Meadow...hope you are well this fine evening x |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:48 pm ] |
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I am very well thank you Iceman and ....looking forward to this novel of yours! |
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| Author: | ArabellaFrexienet [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:55 pm ] |
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Ooooh chilling! |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:05 am ] |
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Meadow wrote: I am very well thank you Iceman and ....looking forward to this novel of yours! Why thankyou  its a little bit daunting but i must admit i am enjoying writing it !
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:36 pm ] |
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Iceman you never fail, I love it x |
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| Author: | ClaraJaneGreeves [ Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:39 pm ] |
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That's really really good!
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:01 pm ] |
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ClaraJaneGreeves wrote: That's really really good! Thanks Clara, glad you liked it, I enjoyed piecing it together, it makes it all worthwhile when others enjoy what you do x |
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