That is so cool! Thank you
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| Author: | Iceman [ Thu May 31, 2012 6:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | A little hope if you please.. |
When you look but cannot see You leave but not arrive Believe but it's beyond the truth Live life but not alive When light is total darkness When sound is silent too When every day is black as night And every colour's blue, When happiness is something less And friends forget you're there The only season's winter, And the cupboards always bare Find strength where once was weakness Find love where once was none Believe that you can beat the odds Your future's just begun. |
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| Author: | DebraCobra [ Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
That flows really well Iceman. Reminds me a bit of 'IF' not that that's is a bad thing. Good to still see you're writing poems! |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
Thanks Debra, it's a bit chocolate boxy but sometimes it's something you need to write and if the idea is there i do it, enjoying my poetry as much as ever but the novel is priority for the next week or two, hope you are well..x |
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| Author: | SMacca [ Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:29 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
That is so cool! Thank you
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| Author: | ClaraJaneGreeves [ Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
Hi SMacca, like your poems too. Good to have a new face in Grimney. Good poem Iceman. Thanks for the read. Novel? Will you share it with us or are you going to kindle it? What's it about? Just being nosey. 
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| Author: | Iceman [ Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
SMacca you are doing an excellent job, your work is very vibrant, Clara it's called a sense of duty and is about a young lad growing up in abject poverty and Grimney will get an insight as soon as it is finished....x |
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| Author: | Kerdisha [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
Hello all. Hello Iceman, Don1 SMacca, Clara and Debra! |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:19 pm ] |
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Hi Kerdisha... hope you are well x |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
Don1 wrote: Glad you're still writing Ice, it gives me hope. I've been blighted by mixed tidings of late and am unable to be creative. Lots of new characters have arrived since my last visit, which is good for us all. Looking forward to your novel and I hope to post soon. Stay cool.  Your inspiration will return simply from what you are going through now...i believe in you x |
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| Author: | KaraJarina [ Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: A little hope if you please.. |
I hope you are both planning to revitalize the poetry Vault. The Grmney online world is going brilliantly so I've read, some very clever minds at work. But you guys have always been the heart of this aspect of Grimney. Sorry you've been having a hard time Don1. x |
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