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Relative robin redbreast
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Author:  SMacca [ Sun May 27, 2012 1:03 pm ]
Post subject:  Relative robin redbreast
Dearest Soldier, please don't end it yet
But robin I don't like killing
Then stop, she said
I can't my country needs me
Peace, not regret.

Dearest Soldier, please don't end it yet
Robin, why are you here?
Special friend, she said
I feel so lonely, drinking ale
Not alone, my pet.

Dearest Soldier, please don't end it yet
Are you my long lost Uncle?
Yes, she said
Taken by the grim reaper?
Not so grim, I met.

Dearest Soldier, please don't end it yet
Thank you for giving hope
Looking after you as I chirp on the fence
There is life after death, it all makes sense
But please don't end it yet! :!:
Author:  Iceman [ Sun May 27, 2012 3:17 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Relative robin redbreast
Wonderful style and thought..well done excellent !.
Author:  SMacca [ Sun May 27, 2012 3:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Relative robin redbreast
Thanks - praise indeed coming from you!!!

that's the second poem I've ever written!! - I'm beginning to like my creative demons :evil: !! hee hee ....
thanks again for the encouragement!
Author:  Iceman [ Sun May 27, 2012 3:28 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Relative robin redbreast
You have a talent and a keen eye for seeing something in other than a one dimensional light, good for you and please do continue i shall watch with keen interest.
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