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 Post subject: Love
PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2012 8:30 pm 
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I fear you-
The power of your presence,
The draw of anticipation
Of the need, the greed
For a draught of your essence-
The draught which never
Fills my glass-
The breath
Which never fills my lungs.
There is always that
Thirst never quite quenched-
The gasping for more.
There is always the question
Never quite answered-
Hanging in doubt.
And the lust for love lingers-
An addiction drawing down
The strength of the self
To be strengthened
As one in a new essence.
A sum of the parts
Anchored by the roots of
A love, grasped, held-
Yet feared.

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 Post subject: Re: Love
PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2012 9:33 pm 
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I loved that. Flows beautifully.


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 Post subject: Re: Love
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2012 10:54 pm 
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Thank you DebraCobra :)
I'm uplifted that you like it!
Sometimes the flashes and flows of thought have a stuttered feel and sometimes like this they have their own rhythm.

Ta!

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 Post subject: Re: Love
PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2012 8:23 pm 
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I thought that your poem was very good too!


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 Post subject: Re: Love
PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2012 8:51 pm 
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:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Thank you Kerdisha. I am pleased my thoughts touched you in some way. It encourages me to post again when my thoughts determine.

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