Thank you DebraCobra
I'm uplifted that you like it!
Sometimes the flashes and flows of thought have a stuttered feel and sometimes like this they have their own rhythm.
Ta!
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| Author: | incontinent [ Fri May 04, 2012 8:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Love |
I fear you- The power of your presence, The draw of anticipation Of the need, the greed For a draught of your essence- The draught which never Fills my glass- The breath Which never fills my lungs. There is always that Thirst never quite quenched- The gasping for more. There is always the question Never quite answered- Hanging in doubt. And the lust for love lingers- An addiction drawing down The strength of the self To be strengthened As one in a new essence. A sum of the parts Anchored by the roots of A love, grasped, held- Yet feared. |
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| Author: | DebraCobra [ Fri May 04, 2012 9:33 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love |
I loved that. Flows beautifully. |
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| Author: | incontinent [ Sun May 06, 2012 10:54 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love |
Thank you DebraCobra I'm uplifted that you like it! Sometimes the flashes and flows of thought have a stuttered feel and sometimes like this they have their own rhythm. Ta! |
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| Author: | Kerdisha [ Thu May 10, 2012 8:23 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love |
I thought that your poem was very good too! |
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| Author: | incontinent [ Thu May 10, 2012 8:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love |
 Thank you Kerdisha. I am pleased my thoughts touched you in some way. It encourages me to post again when my thoughts determine. |
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