loads of effort into that one well done you...
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Sea Child |
I am a child of the trembling seas, First air I breathed was salty breeze. My heart belongs to the swelling waves, The briny depths are what it craves. I am a child of waters green, Belonging to the world marine. Oh take me to the depths below Under the waves I wish to go. I am a child of the sparkling waters One of Poseidon’s aquatic daughters My soul ebbs and flows with the tide On foam-white horses I do ride. I am a child of the boundless waves, Freer than the land born slaves. One day shall I return to my home, Beneath the waves bright foam? |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
I love this Philomena! One of the best you've written! Can see how you've been spending your time! |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
loads of effort into that one well done you... !
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| Author: | HogstanceBilgecrack [ Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
A Phine effort, Madam. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
Thanks all! Actually did a rhyming one for a change. Phine? Pretty Hot In Nearly Everything? Sounds about right... 
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
Lovely! |
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| Author: | DebraCobra [ Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
Brings out the true mermaid in you. I agree with the others, liked that a lot. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
Thanks all. I grew up by the sea and I always wanted to be a mermaid when I grew up. Also fits in with my favourite evolutionary theory, the Aquatic Ape Hypothesis. Whether it is true or not, I want it to be true. |
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| Author: | MortonBalthus [ Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Sea Child |
Did you? And you are! Me... I never grew up by the sea, and I never wanted to be a clam. Funny how things sometimes flip over into the reverse. Fine poem Philomena! The Aquatic Ape? Sounds odder than me!
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