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| Author: | pacemack [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:36 am ] |
| Post subject: | Erm... |
Turned down corners floaty grey clowns magnificent postures in nearby towns Yet floating to view and angle to impress to a world of new continuing to injest The angle`s to see the posture`s to burn those turned down corners have no cause to turn. |
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| Author: | Elvira [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:51 pm ] |
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| Author: | KaraJarina [ Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Erm... |
Welcome Pacemack. Your poem has good rhythm and style. Hope you will be adding more! We are keen to build a thriving creative community. |
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| Author: | TheEyeOfChaos [ Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Erm... |
Yes. All well and good, but what does it actually mean? |
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| Author: | Mizen [ Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:08 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Erm... |
I like that. It flows really well. Did not write many though did he? 
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