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pacemack
 Post subject: Erm...
PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:36 am 
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Turned down corners
floaty grey clowns
magnificent postures
in nearby towns

Yet floating to view
and angle to impress
to a world of new
continuing to injest

The angle`s to see
the posture`s to burn
those turned down corners
have no cause to turn.
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Elvira
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:51 pm 
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Like it :D

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KaraJarina
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:20 pm 
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Welcome Pacemack. Your poem has good rhythm and style. Hope you will be adding more! We are keen to build a thriving creative community.


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TheEyeOfChaos
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:24 pm 
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Yes. All well and good, but what does it actually mean?

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Mizen
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I like that. It flows really well. Did not write many though did he? :roll:
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