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| Author: | Nydas [ Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:41 am ] |
| Post subject: | Souls at rest. |
Been away awhile and can't remember what I have and haven't posted. This was written before Xmas following a midnight walk in the Graveyard at a place called 'Cocking' near Midhurst. Souls at rest Moonlight bounce off the church slate roof From whence the chosen prey Saving souls for the risen lord In the sunny light of day. Souls at rest under eerie earth Who burns and who’s at peace? Venus watches as the worms chow down Dust to dust beneath our feet. Starlight shining on the memory stones Loves long lost from view Wait to greet you when you pass? There’s darkness under yew. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sun Feb 26, 2012 4:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Souls at rest. |
Really like this Nydas. Great word play and it has a really eerie atmosphere. |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Souls at rest. |
Ditto Nydas. You're brave walking through a graveyard at midnight! |
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| Author: | Witch [ Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Souls at rest. |
Love this. Could feel the night. |
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