Beautiful
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| Author: | Meadow [ Thu Feb 16, 2012 11:03 pm ] |
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A shiny line of jet black cars Glides silently by The first filled to the roof with flowers The restwith passengers in dark attire A sudden pause in a busy, bustling day Slow motion reminder for those Immersed in life's intensity Whose eyes quickly divert away Towards intriguing pavement slabs For no-one wants to gaze too long Upon their own mortality |
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| Author: | DebraCobra [ Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:47 am ] |
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Solemn piece, but good writing Meadow. |
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| Author: | KaraJarina [ Sun Feb 19, 2012 5:02 am ] |
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Slightly shuddering, but effective verse Meadow. |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:17 am ] |
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Thought provoking...excellent. |
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| Author: | Nydas [ Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:57 am ] |
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Beautiful
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