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Author:  Iceman [ Sat Feb 04, 2012 12:50 am ]
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They say a soul can never wain
They say a life cannot be be bought

That life and love can bring such pain
And using them cannot be taught

A single shadow walks beside us
Traces every waking breath

Never shows just what's inside us
Only vanquished by our death

So lay my hat right here beside me
Question not my right to stay

For feelings that have grown inside me
Brought me home I'm here to stay.

Author:  Gwenllian [ Sat Feb 04, 2012 12:58 am ]
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Oh Iceman that is so beautiful!

Author:  Witch [ Sat Feb 04, 2012 7:58 pm ]
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exquisite

Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Feb 04, 2012 10:16 pm ]
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Very nice!

Author:  DebraCobra [ Sat Feb 04, 2012 10:22 pm ]
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That is a fantastic piece of verse. You just get better and better Iceman. :D

Author:  Meadow [ Sat Feb 04, 2012 10:36 pm ]
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Oh Iceman I wish I could write deep and meaningful poetry like this. You are a superstar :D

Author:  Iceman [ Sun Feb 05, 2012 12:42 am ]
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Thank you for your lovely comments, now and then you just get a piece that really is a joy to construct, I enjoyed writing this immensely and your comments are the icing on the cake.. Thank you all. :D

Author:  ClaraJaneGreeves [ Mon Feb 06, 2012 5:20 am ]
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You keep writing we keep reading Iceman! :D

Author:  HogstanceBilgecrack [ Thu Feb 09, 2012 10:12 am ]
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Yet another excellent Iceman offering. 8-)

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