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| Author: | Witch [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Voices |
Lightly whispering in my ear Causing me so much fear For whenever I hear you speak I cannot stop becoming weak All you tell me I must do I try so hard not to listen to you But your commands I will complete My own beliefs you will defeat They all say you'll go away Each and every single day I've tried so hard to make that true But I just can't live without you |
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 10:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Voices |
Very deep.. and well written Witch |
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| Author: | Witch [ Sat Jan 28, 2012 11:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Voices |
Thank you Iceman. Much appreciated. |
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Sun Jan 29, 2012 7:59 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Voices |
lovely ! |
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| Author: | DebraCobra [ Mon Jan 30, 2012 5:32 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Voices |
Really thought provoking Witch! |
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| Author: | Witch [ Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:54 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Voices |
Many thanks |
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