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| Author: | annajeff79 [ Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:56 pm ] |
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Blooded My core pulsates in me. It pumps, tethered, constrained by the dark ropes of my blood. There is no escape from its red rhythm. Here. Take and hold it in your blooded hand. Put it to your lips and taste the salt of your betrayal. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sun Nov 20, 2011 1:01 pm ] |
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Hi Anna. Powerful stuff! For an ex any chance. It is very raw but I like it. Think we have all been there. Would make a great verse for a valentine card. |
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