Excellent poem sugar. Thanks for the read.
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| Author: | incontinent [ Sun Nov 06, 2011 9:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Touching You |
Let me look inside your soul To find the inner you To touch what you think and feel What you are And what you hold true Let me reach inside your mind To touch the self you hold To explore your bias and beliefs The you, of you Unfold Let me reach inside your heart To taste your loves and hates The yearnings and the fears Which scribe your Future fates Oh take me on that journey Let our lives entwine O, look me in the eyes My love Promise you’ll be mine. |
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Touching You |
Beautiful! I've never been brave enough to let anyone in that completely! |
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| Author: | TheVamp [ Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Touching You |
Excellent poem sugar. Thanks for the read. x
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| Author: | incontinent [ Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:05 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Touching You |
Thank you.  It gives me great pleasureIt is a powerful feeling when you feel you want to reach out to someone who is very special. That's what I was trying to express. |
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| Author: | Meadow [ Thu Nov 10, 2011 11:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Touching You |
I love your poetry! You're such a natural. Had a look at your blog, read some poems and am now following you. |
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| Author: | incontinent [ Fri Nov 11, 2011 5:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Touching You |
Wow! Thank you. You made me smile 
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| Author: | Iceman [ Sun Nov 13, 2011 6:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Touching You |
As ever when something is from the heart it extends to the written words...well done
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