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incontinent
 Post subject: Touching You
PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2011 9:42 pm 
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Let me look inside your soul
To find the inner you
To touch what you think and feel
What you are
And what you hold true

Let me reach inside your mind
To touch the self you hold
To explore your bias and beliefs
The you, of you
Unfold

Let me reach inside your heart
To taste your loves and hates
The yearnings and the fears
Which scribe your
Future fates

Oh take me on that journey
Let our lives entwine
O, look me in the eyes
My love
Promise you’ll be mine.

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 Post subject: Re: Touching You
PostPosted: Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:28 pm 
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Beautiful! I've never been brave enough to let anyone in that completely!
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 Post subject: Re: Touching You
PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:06 am 
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Excellent poem sugar. Thanks for the read. ;) x
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 Post subject: Re: Touching You
PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:05 am 
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Thank you. :D It gives me great pleasure
It is a powerful feeling when you feel you want to reach out to someone who is very special. That's what I was trying to express.

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 Post subject: Re: Touching You
PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 11:35 pm 
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I love your poetry! You're such a natural. Had a look at your blog, read some poems and am now following you.

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 Post subject: Re: Touching You
PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 5:57 pm 
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Wow! Thank you. You made me smile :)

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As ever when something is from the heart it extends to the written words...well done ;) ;)

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