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In Truth says he.
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Author:  Iceman [ Thu Nov 03, 2011 12:19 am ]
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So what am i to write today upon this canvas bare?

That I am fine, ok or well, as if that you would care.

String sentences profound as such, that tell you all is well.

Whilst heart is shouting dare it might, in truth I am in hell.

Be still my demons for a while, bring forward silence hence,

That preys upon my very soul that knows such innocence.

I stumble through this sorry life as if caught in a spell,

Revolving faster evermore no exit cant you tell?.

No sanctions thus am I dispensed, no respite so allowed,

To stand so broken many times before the baying crowd

But deep inside the angst of life that haunts my waking hours,

A flicker of what I could be a glimpse of different powers,

Though alas in this life spent such glimpses glow then fade,

For paths that I must follow hence have clearly so been made.

I would complain and bitter so a noise to wake the dead,

But fear i walk amongst them now, just living here instead

Life takes the form of challenge thus to push me to my limit

If I'd been born with all those facts... I never would begin it.
Author:  Gwenllian [ Thu Nov 03, 2011 12:28 am ]
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Iceman, this is so powerful, I hope all is well with you
Author:  Iceman [ Thu Nov 03, 2011 12:42 am ]
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I am well... just tired with the fight. As all of us sometimes find from time to time, expressing it often helps, thanks for your lovely comment as ever Gwenllian.....x
Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:56 pm ]
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I just love the last two lines!
Author:  KaraJarina [ Thu Nov 03, 2011 10:18 pm ]
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Good to have you back Iceman. Another excellent poem.
Author:  MariaVinyan [ Fri Nov 11, 2011 7:38 pm ]
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Great poem Iceman! :)
Author:  incontinent [ Fri Nov 11, 2011 10:48 pm ]
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Quote:
String sentences profound as such, that tell you all is well.

Whilst heart is shouting dare it might, in truth I am in hell.


These words say so much.
Although sometimes we fall, as some say, 'It's no good complaining', as no one listens for long.
However, I listen to your words with hope.

Take care
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