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| Author: | incontinent [ Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | ... and Afterwards |
..... and afterwards Wrapped in togetherness, In the stillness swept with your breath, I listen to the ebb And flow of your love: You breathing for us both. As the tide rises and Falls in the now Of our being I know of your love, And my heart swells In return. ‘til tomorrow love ‘til tomorrow........ Goodnight. Oct 2010 |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:30 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: ... and Afterwards |
I love this! |
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| Author: | TheRaven [ Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:53 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: ... and Afterwards |
Good poem. Thanks. Enjoyed the sentiment and liked the style. |
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| Author: | Tanza [ Wed Sep 28, 2011 8:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: ... and Afterwards |
Oh that's lovely!!! Deeply evocative. Loved it. |
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| Author: | incontinent [ Thu Sep 29, 2011 8:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: ... and Afterwards |
| Thank you
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