Well that's how I read it, with an edge of the ridiculous, which is why I thought the last 3 lines were so good.
I'm a bit ignorant when it comes to poetry types, sorry!
See, you're educating me as well as entertaining me
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
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| Author: | Elvira [ Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
Love the last 3 lines particularly - thanks!! |
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:49 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
It was meant as a bit of a wind-up, as some comptemporary poetry has that feel to it. Maybe I just don't get it? |
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| Author: | Elvira [ Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
Well that's how I read it, with an edge of the ridiculous, which is why I thought the last 3 lines were so good. I'm a bit ignorant when it comes to poetry types, sorry! See, you're educating me as well as entertaining me
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
Oh good, atleast I'm understood some of the time  Thanks
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| Author: | Nydas [ Sat Aug 20, 2011 10:13 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
Really good poem, very wry I thought!  Just to let you know that I put the url to your website in the browser and it wouldn't find it. I have now found the blog using a search engine, but it might slow down traffic if the address is wrong. Nice photo btw! |
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Sat Aug 20, 2011 12:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
Thanks, Nydas. Yes, I did wonder I wanted to put it as signature, but didn't know how. 
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| Author: | Nydas [ Sat Aug 20, 2011 5:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Cardium (comtemporary poetry ) |
If you go to the user control panel, profile and edit signature then you should be able to put your url in there where it should become a link and you can check it works ok. Good luck! |
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