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Author:  Elvira [ Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Confused
A caravan, a naked girl,
A snake with just one eye,
An armful of rare orchids..
Tell me
Can a bullfrog fly?

A precious gem, a hurricane,
A cat that holds a tune,
I have another question now,
What time of day is June?

A lion with a jackdaw,
A boxer with a lamb,
And a jar of small catastrophies,
That tells me who I am.

A harlequin, a swimming pool,
A sun that never dies,
It's raining in my tea cup,
Tell me,
Can a bullfrog fly?
Author:  Gwenllian [ Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:49 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Confused
I have no idea what this means , but I love it!
Author:  Elvira [ Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Confused
Me neither, the first line came from a dream, and the rest just followed, a cascade of words totally under their own steam!! Glad you like it :)
Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Confused
I love it too Elvira. It's great when the words are just there for their own sake rather than some deep symbolism. Art for Art's sake. Wonderful.
Author:  KaraJarina [ Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:34 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Confused
a jar of small catastrophies... I really like that. It's a really fun read and different. Thanks for the share. :D
Author:  Witch [ Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Confused
Love this,

Made me smile,

Exactly what I've been needing.

Thanks :D
Author:  Redvilst [ Fri Aug 26, 2011 11:26 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Confused
For some bizarre reason, this poem made me think of a Tarot deck.
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