I like that, very good thanks
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| Author: | Mattfear [ Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:28 am ] |
| Post subject: | I feel no pain |
I feel no pain I feel no sorrow Will i be here today ? Or gone tomorrow. I experience no joy I experience no hate Will i have a life ? Or is it too late ! I dont know whats up I dont know whats down Am i floating ? Or touching the ground. WHAT AM I ? |
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| Author: | ClaraJaneGreeves [ Tue Aug 09, 2011 2:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: I feel no pain |
Hello and welcome to Grimney. Like your poem, a bit cryptic. Not sure it's very cheery though! You going to share more? |
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| Author: | Mattfear [ Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: I feel no pain |
Thank you, im abit new to this im not the best but its nice too share words xD what the poem/riddle is about is what ever you think it is but i wrote it based on a unborn baby |
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| Author: | Nydas [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 8:57 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: I feel no pain |
I like that, very good thanks
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| Author: | Witch [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: I feel no pain |
Welcome, Nice work, look forward to more. |
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