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Author:  Iceman [ Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:57 am ]
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Be still like stone had made me so,
Be silent just like flowers grow
Think thoughts that made a million dreams
Make wishes worry not it seems

Yourself and all your thoughts transpire
One moment spent a lifetimes fire
For mortal souls like us abound
Will seldom think without a sound.


The air we breath unto us sacred
Born unto our mothers naked
In that wail of new born cries
Our birth begins our own demise


So take a message we should heed
On life's harsh pace and cronic greed
That when your lifetimes toil is wasted
You missed the silence... and how it tasted.
Author:  Gwenllian [ Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:59 am ]
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thought provoking and beautifully put as ever Iceman :)
Author:  Iceman [ Wed Aug 03, 2011 1:01 am ]
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Your lovely comments are as always very welcome Gwenllian x
Author:  Nydas [ Wed Aug 03, 2011 7:32 pm ]
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Iceman, splendid!
*bows*
xx
Author:  Iceman [ Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:44 pm ]
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thankyou Nydas.x.
Author:  suereaney [ Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:45 am ]
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Yours was the first poem I read after joining the site and what a great start! I've been reading and writing poetry since I was about 4 years old. I think it's a fantastic outlet for feelings and emotions, and wow, what an emotive read this was. I look forward to reading many, many more - Sue
Author:  Nydas [ Mon Aug 08, 2011 12:35 pm ]
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Welcome Sue, Look forward to seeing your work! Iceman's a belting poet, sets the bar high eh?
Author:  Elvira [ Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:38 pm ]
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He took the bar and made cocktail sticks out of it...
(surreal huh?)
Author:  Iceman [ Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:42 pm ]
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suereaney wrote:
Yours was the first poem I read after joining the site and what a great start! I've been reading and writing poetry since I was about 4 years old. I think it's a fantastic outlet for feelings and emotions, and wow, what an emotive read this was. I look forward to reading many, many more - Sue



Welcome to the enjoyable band of writers and poets that is Grimney. Thanks for your kind words and hope you enjoy being part of such an excellent site with so many talented people to choose from.
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