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Iceman
 Post subject: Listen
PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:57 am 
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Be still like stone had made me so,
Be silent just like flowers grow
Think thoughts that made a million dreams
Make wishes worry not it seems

Yourself and all your thoughts transpire
One moment spent a lifetimes fire
For mortal souls like us abound
Will seldom think without a sound.


The air we breath unto us sacred
Born unto our mothers naked
In that wail of new born cries
Our birth begins our own demise


So take a message we should heed
On life's harsh pace and cronic greed
That when your lifetimes toil is wasted
You missed the silence... and how it tasted.

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Gwenllian
 Post subject: Re: Listen
PostPosted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:59 am 
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thought provoking and beautifully put as ever Iceman :)
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Iceman
 Post subject: Re: Listen
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Your lovely comments are as always very welcome Gwenllian x

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Nydas
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Iceman, splendid!
*bows*
xx

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Iceman
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thankyou Nydas.x.

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suereaney
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Yours was the first poem I read after joining the site and what a great start! I've been reading and writing poetry since I was about 4 years old. I think it's a fantastic outlet for feelings and emotions, and wow, what an emotive read this was. I look forward to reading many, many more - Sue
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Nydas
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Welcome Sue, Look forward to seeing your work! Iceman's a belting poet, sets the bar high eh?

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Elvira
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He took the bar and made cocktail sticks out of it...
(surreal huh?)

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Iceman
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suereaney wrote:
Yours was the first poem I read after joining the site and what a great start! I've been reading and writing poetry since I was about 4 years old. I think it's a fantastic outlet for feelings and emotions, and wow, what an emotive read this was. I look forward to reading many, many more - Sue



Welcome to the enjoyable band of writers and poets that is Grimney. Thanks for your kind words and hope you enjoy being part of such an excellent site with so many talented people to choose from.

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