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You enter the World
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Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:50 pm ]
Post subject:  You enter the World
These words I wanted to pen
That fragment of time I first saw you.
Longing to crystallise that rush of love
To hold forever.
But fifty hours of swelling labour
Left no strength of mind to find words
And all I wanted was to hold you to my breast
Gazing at those wild eyes,
So alive.
Precious stranger of mine, once myself
But we ceased to be one and with our
Separation,
We were complete.
Author:  GavinPaulCarter [ Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:21 pm ]
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As much as I love reading of your exploits in the tavern and at Hobsbane, you should certainly write more poetry!
Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Jul 30, 2011 10:26 am ]
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Thanks, although it does take me quite a bit more time and effort. :D
Author:  Gwenllian [ Sat Jul 30, 2011 12:46 pm ]
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That's lovely x
Author:  unwornpoet [ Sat Jul 30, 2011 12:51 pm ]
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I'd love to be able to write poems like this, with strong emotion.
Author:  Nydas [ Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:57 pm ]
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Wonderful poem, worth the effort Philomena! More please.
:P
Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Jul 30, 2011 6:17 pm ]
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Thank you all, I will certainly try to knock out a few more for you all.
Author:  Redvilst [ Mon Aug 01, 2011 9:20 am ]
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PhilomenaAquitaine wrote:
.... I will certainly try to knock out a few more for you all.


Yayyyy! :D
Author:  Witch [ Wed Aug 03, 2011 7:21 pm ]
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Love this,

Can relate,

:)
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