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 Post subject: Jack's Rake
PostPosted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 7:50 pm 
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The Ark loomed and peered at us,
A dark glance as if to say
“Take a look at these two.
Do you think we should let them play?”
The answer, a revealed secret
Marked by a mountain ash:
On the face of a noble mountain,
A fearsome looking gash.

A branch it waved and beckoned
“Come up! The climb starts here.”
Nothing was said of loose hand-holds
Or chimneys belching fear.
The climb was made for lighter men
(At least ones without rucksacks).
“Three points” included knees and ears
And finger-tips and backs.

We gain the top after many a heart stop,
Sun bursting from low in the west,
And feel as if the mountain has pinned
A medal on each chest.
There’s smiles and grins and slaps on backs.
So glad we haven’t fallen.
And the Ark smiles too, it had some fun
With grey-top and the tall ‘en.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 9:49 pm 
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Thanks for the thoughtful words!

I've never thought the powers of nature enjoyed our play. Are we but playthings and our 'smiles and grins and slaps on backs' self delusion? :roll:

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 10:16 pm 
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incontinent wrote:
... Are we but playthings and our 'smiles and grins and slaps on backs' self delusion? :roll:


If we indulge in all those things because we think we can conquer mountains, then yes, it's self-delusion. If it's because we acknowledge we've conquered our own weaknesses, with a little help from the mountain, they're all perfectly valid. :D

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:35 pm 
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Really like this poem! thanks

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