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| Author: | slinger [ Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:22 am ] |
| Post subject: | Rock 'n' Roll |
This was a response to a wee challenge - a Shakespearean sonnet but "without all that thee and thou stuff." So, check the scansion, count the iambs, sniff the glove; cos Rock and Roll is here to stay... Quote: This kid Elvis, all leather, hips, and sneer Shook his ass and scared a generation But we all laughed 'cause we could smell their fear Hey pops, meet the man who's our salvation Jerry Lee, scandal 'bout his baby bride Stocking tops, Chantilly lace a-peekin' New stars in heaven, those young Gods who died But darlin' the killer is still speakin' Magic music, Murry on our station Lips brushing lips, the smell of sweet perfume Little Richard screams his invocation a-wop-bop-a-lu-bop-a-lam-bam-boom Touch the music each and every day 'cause baby, rock and roll is here to stay Thank you very much. Slinger has left the building. |
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Rock 'n' Roll |
I like this! I'm getting used to different forms at the moment. I have mostly written sonnets, so far. I think you've met your challenge well |
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| Author: | Redvilst [ Mon Jul 25, 2011 7:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Rock 'n' Roll |
Sling on rocker! I mean, rock on Slinger! |
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