PhilomenaAquitaine wrote:
Human physiology and hangovers! Now that is a poem that speaks to me!
Lol! I love to use medical terminology etc. It probably isolates some of my poetry from people.
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Perils of Alcohol |
Molten sunrise creeps over porcelain, Rising, malodourous coagulate. Etiolate washes down albumen, Sulphur chasing CO2 precipitate. Homeostasis hangs in the balance Fields of alveoli gasping for breath. Haunted by nystagmus, eyes fixed in trance. Fingers snatching at the corners of death. Entangled dendrites squander wits and guile. Nephrons asphyxiating in the dust. Active gall bladder haemorrhaging bile, In shadows of vomit and self-disgust. One night of fun and now you're moribund. Water is your drink of choice from now on. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
Human physiology and hangovers! Now that is a poem that speaks to me! |
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
PhilomenaAquitaine wrote: Human physiology and hangovers! Now that is a poem that speaks to me! Lol! I love to use medical terminology etc. It probably isolates some of my poetry from people.
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
Don1 wrote: Me too. My liver hates me right now. Thanks for the symptomatic outline Unwornpoet and welcome to Grimney.  Thank you for your welcome. I'm trying to win back my liver's friendship at the moment, with promises of healthy eating, exercise and staying on the wagon. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:08 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
You're making me want to write a poem about oxidative phosphorylation! |
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| Author: | Redvilst [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
Nice one, and for all those who love the biological explanations, here is just the song for you:- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oax3cUFsBSw 
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
PhilomenaAquitaine wrote: You're making me want to write a poem about oxidative phosphorylation! I'l have to look that one up! 
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| Author: | unwornpoet [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
Redvilst wrote: Nice one, and for all those who love the biological explanations, here is just the song for you:- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oax3cUFsBSw Great video response . I've yet to meet an Irish 
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
unwornpoet wrote: PhilomenaAquitaine wrote: You're making me want to write a poem about oxidative phosphorylation! I'l have to look that one up! Biochemistry. |
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| Author: | PhilomenaAquitaine [ Thu Jul 28, 2011 12:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: The Perils of Alcohol |
This poem is me today. Hangovers and toddlers do not mix. |
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