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I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
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Author:  unwornpoet [ Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:05 am ]
Post subject:  I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
Hush, Shhh! Quietness is not for me; I’m
Not a muted man. Commit to choice, the
Cool of shade? and mask your silent crime;
Prisoner to your personality.
Shackled to your pride, quiescent victim of
Your shame. No audience to entertain’
A member of a one-man-band, in love
With solitude, and partner to disdain.
Take yourself away from me I
Cannot comprehend it. It’s your disease;
Timidity; affliction of the shy.
The noiseless silence leaves me ill-at-ease.
Sing to me my friend, it’s your choice?
I’m afraid, and need comfort in your voice.
Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
Love this.
Author:  unwornpoet [ Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
Thanks very much :) It's nice to receive feed back.
Author:  Redvilst [ Mon Jul 18, 2011 10:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
PhilomenaAquitaine wrote:
Love this.


Me too. :)
Author:  Gwenllian [ Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
Very good !
Author:  DebraCobra [ Tue Jul 19, 2011 1:39 am ]
Post subject:  Re: I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
You're very talented too. Happy that you've joined us! Brilliant wording and structure. :D
Author:  unwornpoet [ Tue Jul 19, 2011 1:31 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
thank you all for lovely comments :D
Author:  Witch [ Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: I'm not the Silent type (say's He)
Really good, like alot.
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