Thank you evenaive. As the writer, you never quite know how it will be for the reader, so it's good to hear. Thanks again.
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| Author: | Redvilst [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Two rhymes on rhymes ... |
1. Sometimes, a poem catches The mood and flies Heartwards, there to lodge a while. The verse then snatches At half-forgotten joys; A remembrance of your smile. Suddenly, your long absence pains. Then you and rhymes Share space, snug in that beating place. While to the mind remains An image formed from Two: the poem and your face. 2. The Poetry Filter Push prose through a heart That’s bleeding, and the words are stained: they change their Effect, if not their meaning. They formerly spoke to reason; Now to emotion they are leaning. The words thus heart-filtered, The wound they help to seal. Heart jolts heart again to start; Renewed; fresh joys to feel. |
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| Author: | evenaive [ Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Two rhymes on rhymes ... |
Funnily enough I just wrote '..poetry helps..' in a thread, and there we are...far more beautifully put! Thanks Redvilst x |
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| Author: | Redvilst [ Sat Jul 16, 2011 10:03 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Two rhymes on rhymes ... |
Thank you evenaive. As the writer, you never quite know how it will be for the reader, so it's good to hear. Thanks again.
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