Thank you both, it came from the heart
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | in fields we lay |
In quiet fields we lay together whispering promises of love forever Arms entwined, lips locked in lust no-one could turn our dreams to dust we laughed, we loved, we made our plans we walked together hand in hand only we mattered, the world didn't exist and stars exploded when we kissed It wasn't an easy path to tread it would never last, so everyone said I hear you ask, how did it all end? were hearts broken, never to mend? eleven years on, we lie together still whispering promises of love forever |
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| Author: | evenaive [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:36 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
That's gorgeous Gwen *sighs* |
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| Author: | HogstanceBilgecrack [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
I love this. It reminds me of a time (not so long ago) when my life was much simpler. Thanks Gwen. x |
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:45 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
Thank you both, it came from the heart
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| Author: | ClaraJaneGreeves [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:50 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
Beautiful poem Gwen. Loved it a lot.  x
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| Author: | HogstanceBilgecrack [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
Gwenllian wrote: Thank you both, it came from the heart The best place... |
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| Author: | WaylandCybersmith [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
Truly beautiful. |
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| Author: | Redvilst [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:26 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
Excellent. The title caught me out: being a Wilf Owen fan I thought it was going to be about the First World War. Pleasant surprise.
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| Author: | Witch [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
Lovely
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Sat Jul 16, 2011 10:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: in fields we lay |
Thanks all, sorry Redvilst didn't realise I'd pinched someone elses tiltle! good thing the subject matter is different
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