Very clever!
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| Author: | GlosnikPrawdy [ Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:27 am ] |
| Post subject: | Turnabout |
Arriving at the palace I looked back where my enemy was Watching and wondering Such good Turned into Such evil I barely understand how The heart of man Can change But forgiveness and grace Can change The heart of man I barely understand how Such evil Turned into Such good Watching and wondering I looked back where my enemy was Arriving at the palace |
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| Author: | WaylandCybersmith [ Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
Interesting. I had to read it twice to work out what you had done. I think I might have a go. |
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| Author: | Nydas [ Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
NICE! |
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| Author: | CharTea [ Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
Very clever!
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| Author: | Tanza [ Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
Wow...like it...like it a lot. |
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| Author: | Witch [ Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
Nicely done, took me a while but got there. |
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| Author: | Squowser [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
I think I got it. Liverpool the heart of me is rooted there where my family is rooted there the heart of me is Liverpool OK, it ain't Wordsworth like, but I had a bash, right? |
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| Author: | Redvilst [ Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
Bravo! A mirror-poem. |
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| Author: | evenaive [ Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Turnabout |
SO clever! I am itching to try but don't think I can take it at the moment! xx |
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