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GlosnikPrawdy
 Post subject: Turnabout
PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:27 am 
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Arriving at the palace
I looked back where my enemy was
Watching and wondering
Such good
Turned into
Such evil
I barely understand how
The heart of man
Can change
But forgiveness and grace
Can change
The heart of man
I barely understand how
Such evil
Turned into
Such good
Watching and wondering
I looked back where my enemy was
Arriving at the palace

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WaylandCybersmith
 Post subject: Re: Turnabout
PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 5:25 pm 
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Interesting. I had to read it twice to work out what you had done. I think I might have a go.

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Nydas
 Post subject: Re: Turnabout
PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:53 pm 
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NICE!

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CharTea
 Post subject: Re: Turnabout
PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:56 pm 
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Very clever! :)
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Tanza
 Post subject: Re: Turnabout
PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:35 am 
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Wow...like it...like it a lot.
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Witch
 Post subject: Re: Turnabout
PostPosted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:01 pm 
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Nicely done, took me a while but got there.

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Squowser
 Post subject: Re: Turnabout
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:40 pm 
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I think I got it.

Liverpool
the heart of me is
rooted there
where my family is
rooted there
the heart of me is
Liverpool

OK, it ain't Wordsworth like, but I had a bash, right?

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Redvilst
 Post subject: Re: Turnabout
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:34 pm 
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Bravo! A mirror-poem.

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evenaive
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:24 pm 
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SO clever!

I am itching to try but don't think I can take it at the moment!

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