The Land of Grimney - A Community for poets, writers and artists
http://www.thelandofgrimney.co.uk/forum/

10 x 8
http://www.thelandofgrimney.co.uk/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=319
Page 1 of 1

Author:  Redvilst [ Tue Jun 28, 2011 7:25 pm ]
Post subject:  10 x 8

It’s been an hour now.
Shadows have moved, but not yours.
Although your eyes: I’m sure they did,
Soul smouldering behind them,
But blind to me.
Your jaw numb to the touch
As my fingertip traces the line
While my heart joins your lips
On the brink of a smile
For all eternity.


Last one for a few days, fellow Grimorians. Hope to see you in a few days.

Author:  KaraJarina [ Tue Jun 28, 2011 7:28 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: 10 x 8

Thank you very beautiful. Looking forward to your return! X

Author:  evenaive [ Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:50 am ]
Post subject:  Re: 10 x 8

Its quite a bit romantic, a little goosebumpy.

Beautiful poetry.

*eve naive toys the ground with her toe!*

Page 1 of 1 All times are UTC [ DST ]
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group
http://www.phpbb.com/