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| Author: | Redvilst [ Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Before the Battle |
When you are outside Looking in, The face you see Is flesh and skin. Flesh is good at Hiding feeling; A wax mask over Fear congealing? When you are inside Looking out, The face you feel Is fear and doubt. Fear is good at Isolating; All good feeling Doubt’s deflating. If you were me And I were thee We’d likely see the same: We’d both spy A brave ‘un While each Feeling craven. The old appearance game. |
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| Author: | Tanza [ Tue Jun 28, 2011 12:25 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Before the Battle |
Yes...I'm sure lots of people will relate to this Redvlist. Very nicely written too...as usual. |
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| Author: | Gwenllian [ Tue Jun 28, 2011 3:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Before the Battle |
totally relate beautifully put! |
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