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Author:  Iceman [ Sat Jun 25, 2011 10:50 pm ]
Post subject:  A Perfect Place.

I am not sure that I can live up to your wonderful compliments or comments. Suffice to say that I was moved and amazed at all your reactions concerning the past few days events. Sometimes being able to transmit words onto paper means you can be a little too precious at times, a price we all have to pay. I have learnt lessons and I hope you aren't too disappointed in me or the others involved, that would be a sad outcome. I appreciate all you have said and taken your comments on board. I am left humbled at the reaction my leaving caused and I just hope I can repay all your kindness with all I have to give, which are after all just words. I thank you all very much for your support.

My Perfect Place.

I sit inside a warm dry room
And peer outside at darkest gloom
The wind is howling blowing hard
The leaves all dancing round the yard

The rain just pours and falls at will
The wind exerts the fiercest chill
The willow's flowing branches twist
And dance a dance that can't be missed

For here inside my safety lies
As winter plays before my eyes
No ill I feel from natures wrath
As she selects her chosen path

The fire it breathes as if alive
While wind and rain just duck and dive
The warmth of embers glowing bright
cascade around me hold me tight

To me this is my perfect storm
As if upon this moment borne
Forgetting all that's in the past
My one true place my first and last.

Author:  PhilomenaAquitaine [ Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:36 pm ]
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Back by popular demand. I am so pleased as I have only just started to read your work.

Author:  Gwenllian [ Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:30 am ]
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wonderful words as always, welcome back Iceman, so glad you decided to return :D

Author:  Tanza [ Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:40 pm ]
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...and balance is, once again, restored! Yay us!!

I just clapped and everyone looked round. I feel a div now.

'Now'...heh...I mean 'still'! Ha!

Oh dear, I need to calm down!

Iceman...you've made my day maan!

Author:  WaylandCybersmith [ Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:34 pm ]
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Welcome back Iceman!

Author:  Iceman [ Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:01 pm ]
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Thanks for the great comments and wonderful welcome back, look forward to reading and writing with you all.. :D

Author:  HogstanceBilgecrack [ Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:22 pm ]
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Welcome back, Sir!

:mrgreen:

Author:  Witch [ Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:56 pm ]
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Glad your back, Iceman

:D

Author:  Iceman [ Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:15 pm ]
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Thanks all... good to be here.. :D

Author:  Nydas [ Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:01 pm ]
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Phew!
When we put our poetry on public view it is like putting bits of ourselves out for consideration. A bit risky but hopefully worth it overall.
Iceman I do hope you tarry awhile!
:P

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