It is currently Tue Aug 04, 2026 2:32 pm

All times are UTC [ DST ]




Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 10 posts ] 
Author Message
 Post subject: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 10:50 pm 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Thu May 05, 2011 11:24 pm
Posts: 250
I am not sure that I can live up to your wonderful compliments or comments. Suffice to say that I was moved and amazed at all your reactions concerning the past few days events. Sometimes being able to transmit words onto paper means you can be a little too precious at times, a price we all have to pay. I have learnt lessons and I hope you aren't too disappointed in me or the others involved, that would be a sad outcome. I appreciate all you have said and taken your comments on board. I am left humbled at the reaction my leaving caused and I just hope I can repay all your kindness with all I have to give, which are after all just words. I thank you all very much for your support.

My Perfect Place.

I sit inside a warm dry room
And peer outside at darkest gloom
The wind is howling blowing hard
The leaves all dancing round the yard

The rain just pours and falls at will
The wind exerts the fiercest chill
The willow's flowing branches twist
And dance a dance that can't be missed

For here inside my safety lies
As winter plays before my eyes
No ill I feel from natures wrath
As she selects her chosen path

The fire it breathes as if alive
While wind and rain just duck and dive
The warmth of embers glowing bright
cascade around me hold me tight

To me this is my perfect storm
As if upon this moment borne
Forgetting all that's in the past
My one true place my first and last.

_________________
http://davejameswriting.blogspot.co.uk/


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:36 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Sun Jun 05, 2011 1:54 pm
Posts: 7361
Location: Looking pretty behind the bar at Holme's Tavern
Back by popular demand. I am so pleased as I have only just started to read your work.

_________________
http://themermaidmuse.wordpress.com/


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 12:30 am 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Mon May 16, 2011 11:14 pm
Posts: 2215
Location: south Wales
wonderful words as always, welcome back Iceman, so glad you decided to return :D


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 3:40 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:28 pm
Posts: 481
Location: Mostly on the floor
...and balance is, once again, restored! Yay us!!

I just clapped and everyone looked round. I feel a div now.

'Now'...heh...I mean 'still'! Ha!

Oh dear, I need to calm down!

Iceman...you've made my day maan!


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:34 pm 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:30 pm
Posts: 388
Location: Hobsbane Waterfall
Welcome back Iceman!

_________________
Love all, forgive all, show mercy, condemn no-one.
May the King's peace be upon your body, mind, soul and spirit.
May love and joy be ever with you.

http://www.waycyber.com


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:01 pm 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Thu May 05, 2011 11:24 pm
Posts: 250
Thanks for the great comments and wonderful welcome back, look forward to reading and writing with you all.. :D

_________________
http://davejameswriting.blogspot.co.uk/


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:22 pm 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:36 am
Posts: 169
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Welcome back, Sir!

:mrgreen:


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:56 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Tue May 03, 2011 8:34 pm
Posts: 222
Location: Lost
Glad your back, Iceman

:D

_________________
Witch


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 9:15 pm 
Offline
User avatar

Joined: Thu May 05, 2011 11:24 pm
Posts: 250
Thanks all... good to be here.. :D

_________________
http://davejameswriting.blogspot.co.uk/


Top
 Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: A Perfect Place.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 5:01 pm 
Offline
Site Admin
User avatar

Joined: Fri Mar 13, 2009 8:30 pm
Posts: 323
Location: The Queen's Coven
Phew!
When we put our poetry on public view it is like putting bits of ourselves out for consideration. A bit risky but hopefully worth it overall.
Iceman I do hope you tarry awhile!
:P

_________________
Nydas
http://www.walkerbroad.co.uk
http://www.thesanitycompany.co.uk/


Top
 Profile  
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 10 posts ] 

All times are UTC [ DST ]


Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 7 guests


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Search for:
Jump to:  
cron
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group